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| oasis |
 Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 7:50 pm |
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Location: Hilo,Hawaii
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So we're finally going to make a skatepark in this town after about 10 years of lobbying and they need a shirt design.
I think I am either going to add more detail to the bowl or take away some detail from the skull. And I'm still working on the text. Help me out and let me knw what you think. thanks
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| SkaterX |
| Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 8:03 pm |
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Oasis, I dig the version with the flowers, for some reason it works well with the overall shape,,'
I would consider maybe repositing the guys arm, it`s kinda taking away from the skull, pineapple thing you`ve got going there...
The skull thing dosen`t look to be part of the same picture though...I`d add moe detail to the bowl, rather than take away from the skull..
Nice though.....I`d wear it... |
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| slob-air |
| Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 11:12 pm |
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| That skull reminds me of a Deathbox deck (I think it was deathbox... maybe BDS?). |
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| ThrashCan |
| Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 11:27 pm |
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I like the middle layout with the flowers.
I think the bowl looks fine its just the body and the skull look like they were drawn by two different people. |
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| oasis |
| Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 12:54 am |
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it's not really done. yeah the whole boddy is pretty illustrative. thick lines. no detail. I guess I'll jsut throw some crosshatches for folds etc. and tone the detail on the skull down a lil.
you think i should make the arms bones? |
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| Smakutus |
| Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 2:41 am |
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I'd bring the guy up a bit more in the bowl.. Show a bit of truck on the coping etc.. The wheel doesn't look right. I like the flowers. When you print them up I'll buy one from you.
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| brett |
| Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 5:46 am |
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i like this txt style way better than the other.
thought id have a little play
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